Great job
This was a very good poem
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Thats a really good poem.. i thoroughly enjoyed reading it..

I can actually really relate to this cos i used to suffer from terrible night terrors, i just wanted to ask your permission if it;s okay that i write a poem about night terrors, i was inspired by this one. Is that ok? It won't be the same as this, cos night terrors and nightmares are very different
I loved your words in this one though, it almost feels like i can see the noghtmare too
5/5
*Gem*