Destiny

by Brook   Dec 22, 2006


Oh Boy
If we're meant to be
Why must everything stray
And us be too far to see

Love
Such a timeless word
If only it was meant for us
By the good lord

Memories
Though we have so many to remember
We were not meant to be
Our love has faded from an everlasting ember

Thoughts
Constantly hold you
Unforgettable;unregretable
It seems there is nothing else to do

Baby
I was wrong;We are meant to be
Forever and Always, our promise lives on
Even if its you I cannot see

Forever
You and i will be together
Everything will work out
Our love; Light as a feather

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  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Hmm it was good. The use of the single word to begin each stanza was good. I liked your wording for the most if it, but the last line of the first stanza just doesn't make sense, it seems you stopped in the middle of a sentance just to make it rhyme. Also, the third and last stanzas read as forced rhyme too. That was the only thing that let this down for me. Apart from that, it was good. Thanks for sharing.

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