Hmm it was good. The use of the single word to begin each stanza was good. I liked your wording for the most if it, but the last line of the first stanza just doesn't make sense, it seems you stopped in the middle of a sentance just to make it rhyme. Also, the third and last stanzas read as forced rhyme too. That was the only thing that let this down for me. Apart from that, it was good. Thanks for sharing.