Thats mad |
"surceed " |
by David
The description was perfect! brought out true emotion. so dark yet so not. has a bit of everything in it. sadness, a hint of love, hope and yes darkness. |
by Kaila
Woah! You need to publish a book or something! your writing is absolutly amazing! I only saw a few mistakes |
by Unrequited
Are you serious?? You wrote this?? Because I am blown away!!! I have read a lot of poems in the last few years since I began writing, and this one is... one of the greatest pieces of writing I have seen. The rhythm, the rhyme, the diction, the message, the imagery... it all perfectly combined into one incredible, soulfull, breathtaking poem!!! Because of this, you are now going onto my favorites. :) I do not read too much these days, but I now look forward to your poetry. Great job!! |
by Tricky Daze
Long but to the point,you have talent,your vocabulary and imaginery are so creative |
Should i say wow again?? hmm nah i should but this is another great poem... u hav an awsome talent....and it shows =) |
by Kaila
Wow...I loved this poem it was excellent definitly my fave so far! |
by Vanessa
Upon the moon |
I thought this an awesome poem, i like the imagery as in scorched blackened wings, very vivid and realistic, and yet far off and distant |
When I first read this poem it sounded like an anti suicide poem and that’s something very rare on this site and it really grabbed my attention. In the end however I was shocked when the angel died, but you managed to create it in a very poetic and sad way. Well done, I loved it. |