Say it loud, say it proud!

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A very good poem. Your emotions shown through and you descriptions were fantastic. It feels nice to read a poem that's about being strong in life.
The only problem I see is that the flow was a bit rocky in some places.
Overall, wonderful job writing this one. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

My favourite part was the last two lines, I thought those really stood out.
I liked this, I thought it was well written.