Dragon

by Brittany C   Dec 22, 2006


Flying high above the world,
Spewing flames of brimstone.
This flawless creature of the
ancient worlds of the past.
Gracefully flying through the sky.

Distorting all that threaten it.
As knights in black armor,
come to kill this wonderful creature.
That just wants to protect its baby.
Like any other mother would.

The nights fall to the power
of this beautiful dragon.
As wizards try to stop the knights,
knowing that they could not win.
The nights didn't heed their warning.

The castle of the King has fallen.
Only then did everyone realize,
that this creature belonged there,
just as much as anyone else did,
if not more, for she had been there
since the beginning of time it's self.

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  • 17 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    4/5, it was alright, but more of a story, rather than a poem, didn't sem like much effort.

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I think you could have been a bit more descriptive of the dragons feelings about the knight, a little bit more about the surrondings/setting; all in all I think you could extend it.

    So. I'd try extending it a bit. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex No Rate

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey beautiful poem...there are few errors though but the choice of words was great..
    I liked this line
    'The nights fall to the power of this beautiful dragon'
    ^^It's well written!
    Good job!
    5/5

    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Flam's = flames
    belong=belongs
    Youd di a great job, the topic was unqiue, and the word choice excellent 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    "This flawless creature of the
    ancient worlds of the past." the double of the in those sentances throws it off a little bit. Wow I really loved this poem.. the last line was my favorite "for she had been there since the beginning of time itself" it just spoke to me in a way that very rarely happens.. wonderful work. with such a unique topic.

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