Hey Brittany, very good comment!

This poem really reminded me of the book Eragon. Really good.

Spewing flam's of brimstone.
Flam's = flames??? I could be mistaken .
that this creature belong there,
belong = belonged

Anyways -- Something brought the picture of Eragon to my head . I`ve never read the book so I don`t know if there might be an idea of this in there xD But this is a very good poem(: I don`t normally read dark poems so idk what to say .
..__MiNDYY

Very very good i like it alot!!

Wow, this is so true, about such majestic animals, they are dishonered even though they haven't done anything wrong, it was a really good poem, the flow was pretty good, though the punctuation was a bit off in some parts, and in the begginning it would be "flying" instead of "fling" besides that, it was pretty good, so i would give you a 4/5

Wow. strong emotion. I loved it, a lot. the third stanza was my favorite. > 'The nights fall to the power of this beautiful dragon'
.. best line, hunni. keep it up. :D

"This flawless creature of the
ancient worlds of the past." the double of the in those sentances throws it off a little bit. Wow I really loved this poem.. the last line was my favorite "for she had been there since the beginning of time itself" it just spoke to me in a way that very rarely happens.. wonderful work. with such a unique topic.

Flam's = flames
belong=belongs
Youd di a great job, the topic was unqiue, and the word choice excellent 5/5

Hey beautiful poem...there are few errors though but the choice of words was great..
I liked this line
'The nights fall to the power of this beautiful dragon'
^^It's well written!
Good job!
5/5

xxPoojaxx

I think you could have been a bit more descriptive of the dragons feelings about the knight, a little bit more about the surrondings/setting; all in all I think you could extend it.

So. I'd try extending it a bit. =]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex No Rate

4/5, it was alright, but more of a story, rather than a poem, didn't sem like much effort.