by ...W/E Dec 22, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I look up to the sky and wonder why |
THAT WAS THE BEST ONE! except srry i have this problem with the second line change it to: but i don't know why, it sounds a lot better, try it! now i have commented all ur poems how about you commont some of mine? well i will talk to you soon i know i will! i hope ceramics was not boring without me, i got to sleep in till 9:30 it was nice, well talk to ya soon....toodles |
I love the wording and the structure. good job |