Awww, so sweet :) well done xx

I think that poem expression was good. I like how you are such a happy loving caring person, by reading 2 of your poems and ur profile...I think though in this poem, you need to write it up better, I love it and all but it doesnt mesh together very well.....I think you need to do something, i dont no what, but i no it wont take alot to improve it.
once again, Peace, Happiness and blessed be
=)