Lost Hope.

by Krzysztof J   Dec 22, 2006


I thought i meant something,
I though that i did,
I did everything right,
But i won't be missed.

I fought till my last breath,
Till all my strength left,
I fought with everything
All that I am.

I've give my all,
All that i could,
I've given my heart,
And my soul to be used.

I'm broken and shattered,
Battered and bruised,
Feel lonely and empty,
Used and abused.

I've given my all,
Please understand,
Theres only just blood,
thats left here to take.

Last night you broke me,
One final time,
Nothings worth fighting for
Not even my life.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Once again. Loads of emotion in one poem. Amazing piece of work. It ends perfectly - y'know like there is nothing left to say. Excellent.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by marcelah

    Awww. you shouldn't feet like that. hope is the only thing that means anything anymore. loved it. 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    Aww I hope your feeling better, I know exactly what you mean in this poem cause thats exactly the same thing I go through. But if you ever need to talk you can email me anytime. Another great poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Me

    =( its sad but good. Oh hun... if only I could give you what you wanted. I would love to... but thats soemthing you have to find for yourself. I'm sorry I love you!!! and thank you for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    It sounds so final... I really think you should show her every single poem you've ever written hun, it might knock some sense into her and show her how much you care and no matter how hard she pushes you away, you're staying put.

    I'm wishing you the best of luck sweetie.
    5/5
    *Gem*

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