U realy drawd the line. it flows so smoothly.

"i thought i meant something,
i though that i did
i did everything right
but i wont be missed."

those words really touched me. everyone wants to leave a mark. u word it well:)

It sounds so final... I really think you should show her every single poem you've ever written hun, it might knock some sense into her and show her how much you care and no matter how hard she pushes you away, you're staying put.

I'm wishing you the best of luck sweetie.
5/5
*Gem*

=( its sad but good. Oh hun... if only I could give you what you wanted. I would love to... but thats soemthing you have to find for yourself. I'm sorry I love you!!! and thank you for the comment

Aww I hope your feeling better, I know exactly what you mean in this poem cause thats exactly the same thing I go through. But if you ever need to talk you can email me anytime. Another great poem! 5/5

Awww. you shouldn't feet like that. hope is the only thing that means anything anymore. loved it. 5/5!

Once again. Loads of emotion in one poem. Amazing piece of work. It ends perfectly - y'know like there is nothing left to say. Excellent.

Kelly
xx