Thought wrong...

by Sara   Dec 23, 2006


Cute together,
in love forever,
Never to be apart
we said from the start

It wasnt a little kids "like"
like for his love for his bike,
but a grown up love
as if we were soaring above

Together we would be all the while
and we would only smile
at each other,
he was like my brother,
we could talk about anything
and everything

But our love must not have been too strong
Because after this long,
we got into a fight
it gave me a fright,
and you told me you didnt want to see me again and get out
I looked at him with a pout

He walked away from me
How much sadder can I be?
It hurts to remember him
but I try to put on a grin

I guess were not what I thought we were...

Not Cute together,
not in love forever,
we are apart
we were wrong from the start..

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  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Haha...mines fues tomorrow or tuesday....we can have it finished either day. i guess that i will do it today or tomorrow...haha. it is 8:58 am here. i should be getting ready for church but i love reading poetry...haha! have fun with shane!!!! i am going to see wil in about an hour or two. YaY! lol.

  • 17 years ago

    by SweetElectric

    WOW! awww, its so heartbrakingly sweet! I love it! I love your poems! keep it up! 10/10
    PS: thanks for commenting on my poems! Means a lot to me! =)

    xxxo

  • 17 years ago

    by I will love you Forever and not a day less

    Wow... i really like your poem a lot of people can reltate to this and thankz for the comment ..........ur a really good poet keep up the good work 5/5 from me....

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelso

    Another great poem by you i loved it.5/5. And oh my God did he really you must be happy hope things go well with you and him. comment back.

    **Kelsey**

  • 17 years ago

    by Courtney

    Beautiful. You're GREAT at rhyming! I can really relate to the emotioms in this, right now. Great job!

    xoxo

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