Love Letter

by BrokenToy   Dec 23, 2006


Love Letter

I lay in my queen-size bed
The music playing in my ear
Soon the darkness around consumes me
Letting me peacefully dream of you

I wake up with a smile
The thoughts of you still linger
The sweet smile I always liked
And eyes so deep and blue

The world around comes into focus
I am startled by my feelings
We have always been good friends
With our tricky games of cat-mouse

I used to sting you hard
My words sharper than a sword
You would respond without any doubt
With the same sting of words

While people wonder if we’re sane
We knew it was a game
It was always just joking around
Nothing other than a harmless game

I feel my heart breaking apart
Being far far away from you
We are parted by an ocean
For another couple of long months

I just want to come home
To see you and tell you
How I felt being far away
Tell you that I love you
More than anyone or anything else

/AN: So I beg you to look closely to at the poem. I have made it so that there is a even amount of words in every sentence. A poem is about the set up and feelings, not about rim, so please take that into consideration. I would love some feedback!

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  • 17 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    I find this poem to be very good. There is no need for the rythm, the sentence structure is good, and the emotion is the main aspect, as well as the flow.