This poem very much reminds me of "Dracula," the original novel.

A facinating poem in the sense that you connected the phrases so well when writing in such a limited style. Not something your average poet can do.

Woah... i like it! darling, darling! the repeatition is just wonderful... i tried reading it out loud and i was feeling a sense of lust and wanting... love the words you used... made it all the more sensual in a way... 5/5!

~angel~

Its pretty good and nice repeating the ist line( the titlled of the poem) for me , i want the flow i enjoyed. so i give it 5/5 god bless

I liked the repitition very much indeed. In my opinion, it tries to make the poem seem confusing, yet it still makes sense...? Ha, what the hell am I on about?

Anyhow, to the point - I loved it. Excellently penned, and I loved the images created. 5/5.

It so cute

I really liked this, I thought the repetition worked really well.
I loved your use of imagery, as always.
I thought this flowed really well and the rhyme scheme was a joy to read.

This is beautifully written, it paints such a picture!!! Good job writing in that style to!! It flowed wonderfully! Keep up the good work!!! And also, I agree, GO TO H*L* DOWNVOTERS!!! lol!! Well keep up the good!!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

I adored the title of this poem. I've always wanted to have a title with 'Darling' or 'Baby' ... I think I will do that in the future though! Thanks for an inspiring poem, very well written! I loved the dark imagery.

"Your eyes shine in the light of pure ecstasy." I absolutetly loved this line, it was beautiful.

I really liked this poem, but i found it a bit hard to follow, maybe it's just because i don't fancy the form you wrote it in. But i must say, your choice of words and rhymes were beautiful, and it really painted a dark and very clear image of what you were trying to describe. Great work.

--Steph

I absolutely love it.
-deadbeatromance

Wow. mmm i'm like picturing the scene. and i love it. its kinda creepy, but awesome!!!

It's an interesting poem. I don't know about Terzanelles, so I don't know if you have to keep on repeating a certain line, or slightly change a slightly line and whatever. Anyway, the repeating of that one line/slightly changing and repeating had a tremendous effect on me, it changed the whole poem. I went back and read it again without the sentences that keep on repeating, and to be honest, I had no interest in this piece at all. The repetition makes the poem. Keep up the good work.

Really interesting type and a good subject,well done