Amazingg

I really like it. gud job.

Excellent!

Uhm, deffinitally not your best. but its still good. i like it and all and the idea of it is good im just not to sure on like how its written or whatever. maybe its just me?

This reminds me of my last relationship. Again a great and powerful read. A true poet you are. And a landing on my faves list you get!

Its funny how we can be so mad at somebody we love and tell them that they don't mean anything anymore and just want to leave, but a few words from them can make us stay and change our mind in an instant, nice work 5/5

JEEZ. girl your good at poetry.

i think u may have spelled shield wrong. spell check. otherwise perfecto!

Another well put poem here. there is a simple flow to it which i think helps put the poem together well. great work. i love how you used the words (dead words) to put how you feel about what the person says. great work.

Excellent =) I loved it! The only things I thought I should point out are:

"Im just *you* (your) fall back girl"
-just a simple typo =P

and..

"But you always know just what to say
To make me feel at ease
You always know just what to say
*So that I don’t leave* (So that I do not leave) "
-I think that makes the flow a little better..

Well, that's it! Overall, it's excellent!
5/5

This is a real good poem, with lots of emotion, i get the impression that you feel weak, but you always so only strenght? well done

Narc xxx

Really good work. I definitely understand and can relate to this a lot. Keep up the good work.

* it's great this one.. it speaks with so much feeling, I believe it is an intense poem.. :) great job..

x

Jeez. that poem just made me wana break down and cry, cos in a way i think i know how you were feeling when you wrote that. that poem was so strong, it would leave any1 who read it speechless 4 a minute. because when i read it i just felt the rejection in it and it made me remember how i actually feel sometimes. and i know for a fact that would make people who are cared for all the time feel lonely after reading that because it is so strong. i love how you repeated the first verse at the end but added the 'now'. that is what i call a good, strong, meaningful ending. well done 5/5 :)