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by Isabelle Dec 23, 2006 category : Love, romance / lost love
These feelings she knew, they shouldn't have to go, because she loved him so. He told her, He left her, behind in the dust. Even when the tears were falling, he vowed to never come back. The poor girl's heart was shredded, still imbedded, with the memories, the memories of him. This love she once knew had came to an end.
by Rona
Perhaps you could've added more to this poem. I found it kinda short. Overall, good job!
by lala
Very nice work, yet again I can relate that is very good in writing poetry ^^