by Gem
I really hope i never have to say or hear those words.. |
Written from the heart obviously. Its not a good poem though. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
That was really good. i could definately feel the pain in that. keep up the work. 5/5 |
by broken angel
My eyes literally welled with tears after reading this. This poem describes perfectly how I lost the love of my life, and I'm sorry if the same thing happened to you. This poem is incredibly powerful, as is it's writer. You did a fantastic job. It truly won my heart. 5/5 ~ p.s. thank you for the comment on my work, and sadly yes it is a true story. |
Words can hurt more than physical pain... |
by Michelle18
This is so sad..but its a great poem |
by Lithium
I just wanna pick you up and hug you hehe that a really powerful poem i love your last stanza well done |
The bitter-sweet reality of love...thats exactly what you have portrayed here. Very strong and heartfelt piece Nitin. After reading this, I dont think you have any more room for improvement. |
by Jenni
I can't undertand how this poem has an overall rating of a 4.0 this is an amazing poem and everything just flowed so well together. your poetry is some of the best on this website, you are definately one of my favorite authors. 5/5 |
by ben thompson
I really connected to this write. that pain of lost feelings is the worst. very hard to get through. but we do it because we must. very good. 5/5 |