Ohmigod, that so sad. i was gonna cry. =[

Aww..Thats soo sad. Which means its really good!
I liked your writing style!
Tis pretty good!
But one suggestion..i think you should make it a tiny lil bit longer..jus a suggestion...but its really good right now as well!
5/5 ^_^

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`*-Tormented

PS PS PS: Thanks 4 your lovely comment

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