This will never happen to us because i have your heart inside mine and to break yours, i'd have to break mine first...
Love you
Marcus

This was very sad yet still beautiful. The way you write poems they are so wonderful to read. Excellent job on this one.

"We quietly sat and watched the stars
It was the calm before the storm"

This is a great couplet! I loved the poem! Flow and rhyming were great!
xoxo

Very good, i absolutely loved it 5/5

"I watched you walk away from me
It was like you didn't care
The storm had blew away my soul
And left my heart stripped bare..."
God i really love that part, when people walk away it is as tho they dont care :((( fantastic poem!!

Well such storms are very heart breaking but the way you potray the whole situation...its just remarkable, sometimes it seems as if you are having 3 eyes and could see everything from a new angle.

Great write

all the best and take care

Great job! I like how it was all compared to a storm. I've been off for a while so I've got a lot to read!
Charisma*

OMG! This is awesome! My sister reads your stuff that's how I got to reading your poems! Now I know why she reads it! You're great! Keep it up!
♥ prepxskater