X Why? x

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Dec 23, 2006


Why do i love you?
When verbal speech is so bad,
Things you have done to me in the past,
Makes a girl go mad.

I need you to see this,
For your presence to feel my force,
Sometimes, i want to harm or kill you,
From your mistakes; no remorse.

No in depth sorry,
No plead for another chance,
My weakness you take advantage,
Forgiven with a glance.

My weakness is your strength,
My pain seems to be your triumph,
My love to strong for me to see it,
Even when I'm feeble and crying.

Please stop this hurting me darling,
My heart relies on you to survive,
Your wisdom,knowledge, your Independence,
Is keeping my soul alive.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Another great poem frm u...so powerful!...well penned!Kp up de good wrk!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Once again, another great emotion filled poem..

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "My weakness is your strength,
    My pain seems to be your triumph,
    My love to strong for me to see it,
    Even when I'm feeble and crying."

    That stanza was so powerful, the whole poem was.
    You have some serious talent m'dear
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "My weakness is your strength,
    My pain seems to be your triumph,
    My love to strong for me to see it,
    Even when I'm feeble and crying."

    That stanza was so powerful, the whole poem was.
    You have some serious talent m'dear
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I really liked this poem, it had a good rhythm and flow to it. But, may I suggest more punctuation and capitalizing your I's. The I's doesn't really mess up anything, just makes it look more professional. And, the punctuation helps with the flow, eh.
    Overall: I think you did a wonderful job with this. I really liked it. :D
    5/5

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