Awe~ this reminds me of my first love...

I know how you feel...A lot of people don't like writing about this sore subject because it is very hard to write about...but I think you did an outstanding job!

First line, last stanza
"Please stop this hurting me darling"
maybe you could try
"Please stop hurting me darling"
or
"Please stop hurting me my darling"
only a suggestion.
Other then that this poem is great:) 5/5

Ohhhh that last stanza is so beautiful!
I enjoyed this, I could clearly see the emotion behind the words, the flow was good throughout, and that ending...ohh I love that ending!

That was beatiful. I loved it. The emtion is strong, and I can relate. Well written, and nice chose of words. 5/5 thanks for all the comments. I am sorry it took me so long to get back to you.

I really liked this poem, it had a good rhythm and flow to it. But, may I suggest more punctuation and capitalizing your I's. The I's doesn't really mess up anything, just makes it look more professional. And, the punctuation helps with the flow, eh.
Overall: I think you did a wonderful job with this. I really liked it. :D
5/5

"My weakness is your strength,
My pain seems to be your triumph,
My love to strong for me to see it,
Even when I'm feeble and crying."

That stanza was so powerful, the whole poem was.
You have some serious talent m'dear
5/5
*Gem*

"My weakness is your strength,
My pain seems to be your triumph,
My love to strong for me to see it,
Even when I'm feeble and crying."

That stanza was so powerful, the whole poem was.
You have some serious talent m'dear
5/5
*Gem*

Once again, another great emotion filled poem..

Josie

Another great poem frm u...so powerful!...well penned!Kp up de good wrk!
xxPoojaxx