by Mel
This was so cute! |
Excellent poem...u have this art of creating pictures with ur words... |
Indeed a very sweet poem |
by Krazy
Loved the rhyming. details were very well written. nice word choice. 5/5 |
by Gem
This was so cute, i love the feeling of christmas, everyone is always happy and there's never any arguments in my household on the actual day =) |
by Melpomene
The imagery in this poem was nicely written. It seemed so cute and sweet. I loved the flow. Well done on how you portrayed this poem. It was written nicely.~mel |
by Kaila
Very Cute!! I absolutly love Christmas! It's my all time favorite holiday but the best part has got to be the snow. And reading this poem made me feel the anticipation of awaiting snowfall on Christmas morning! lovely write! |
by Startle Me
On the fifth line |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. Maybe the only change I would think you should make is you might try spliting the stanza into two or more smaller ones. 5/5 |