And now as I awake
You are my first thought
And you will be my last
For no one else have I sought

I think that was my favorite stanza. I liked the title...you just knew it was gonna be good. For some reason in your last line of the 3rd stanza...it just didn't flow right to me. But hey, just a suggestion. Can't wait to read your other new ones! Good job!
Charisma*

Good poem. I enjoyed it....beautiful sentiments.

*Sigh* Great feeling, huh? I loved it and I can totally relate! Thanks for adding me! *Clicks faves*
xoxo

I can deffinitley relate to this. It was very beautiful, and touching. It had a lot of emotion in it.. Very heartfelt piece. I loved the title, as well. Very catchy.

A couple suggestions, though:

You see me dear one [I think that'd read better as: You see MY dear one]

The first make me fly [ & this doesn't really make sense.. I think you should put a 'to' after first.]

Just suggestions though.

Great job, overall.

Bri.x