That is a great poem i loved it ansi can relate keep up the good work
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love linda

So many people will be able to relate to this.
This is why your on my faves, your poems are always from the heart and get to everyone elses!

"I'm still so young
I still have my innocence
I love you, but I can't
Does this make any sense?"

My fave stanza =)
5/5 as always
*Gem*

At first, honestly, I thought the flow was all off....but as I read on, it was a lot better, and I really really really liked it! You had some great catchy stanzas in it, and so many can relate I think. I know I can! I just enjoyed this poem so much!

I love you, but I can't
Does this make any sense?

Those were my fav two lines, but it was awesome from there on out. I think that's when you really got into it!
Charisma*

The way of love....catches us unaware. I enjoyed this one. 5/5

I loved reading this poem, shows how love can sneak up on you when your unaware of it happening.
5/5

Wow. I still love this everytime I read it. It flows really well.. & It's so true for many people.. I can totally relate to this. My favorite stanza was;

"I'm still so young
I still have my innocence
I love you, but I can't
Does this make any sense?"

^ Amazing lines there..

Great job. Keep it up

Bri.x