by Elynnka
Good rhymes and flow! I really liked the storyline and the way you've written it. The first lines really draw you in. Good write! |
by Tripp
This is absolutely amazing...you are an amazing writer. The story you told in this, along with the imagery and rhyme and rhythm were fantastic. There's no other way to put it...it's incredible. I loved this, and I'm even saving it to my computer for inspiration. This is possibly the best poem I have read on this website...add it to your featured!!! |
by john graver
Good write i enjoyed reading it. |
Wow.....that was really good!! great job!! I'm adding you to my favs. Ah i can't get over how great that was!! |
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by tori
Thats ah-mazing |
by Nix
Title is GREAT! You are so talented and you write excellent dark poetry. This piece has superb atmosphere and you expressed emotions greatly. I really like it, 5/5 |
by Nix
And I forgot it is very unique. Keep up with good work. |