Good rhymes and flow! I really liked the storyline and the way you've written it. The first lines really draw you in. Good write!
5/5

This is absolutely amazing...you are an amazing writer. The story you told in this, along with the imagery and rhyme and rhythm were fantastic. There's no other way to put it...it's incredible. I loved this, and I'm even saving it to my computer for inspiration. This is possibly the best poem I have read on this website...add it to your featured!!!

don't stop writing, you're a phenomenol(know it's spelled wrong) writer...

on a side note, do you live in CT? Someone in my school, NFHS wrote a story about a Sad-Eyed Angel from that same book...and that reminded me soo much of the story. if you have AIM,my screen name is Tripp5ive21. My email is Tripp5ive21@aol.com too. don't think this is only if you live in CT....you're an amazing writer too, and I'd just like to get to know you

Good write i enjoyed reading it.

Wow.....that was really good!! great job!! I'm adding you to my favs. Ah i can't get over how great that was!!

~*~Elisha~*~

Um,
love it!!!
enough said!!!
kat-x-

Thats ah-mazing

Title is GREAT! You are so talented and you write excellent dark poetry. This piece has superb atmosphere and you expressed emotions greatly. I really like it, 5/5

And I forgot it is very unique. Keep up with good work.