by Sandra D Dec 23, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You've had way more than you can handle |
by rene
Another great poems. you are quiet the poet. wish i can be that good. cant really get past....mediocre. but you surpass that. great job thought! |
by Rocky
One of your better poems i think. it flowed well and was a joy to read. and it really had a msg to it. unfortunatly so true for some people , but hey thats life. no one ever said it would be perfect |
Good job, I HATE alcohol, because of what it does to people, and I have had bad experiences with people drinking. It's so sad to see what people can do while under the influence, which is why I will NEVER drink. Great job on this poem, I loved the emotion and every line was perfect.The only critism I can give if you might want to use punctuation. |
by Leanne
Wow such an emotional piece, i really got a feel for the poem. The flow worked really well and the rhyming was good too. |
by David
Everyone has to make choices. it life. some are harder than others. |