Flows really well

I love the poem, it's great!

A sad poem, from the heart.
great structure, and flowed well.
enjoyed reading this one
keep writing
xxx

Everyone has to make choices. it life. some are harder than others.

so good tho. different from the rest but still has the great affect on me! 5.

David

Wow such an emotional piece, i really got a feel for the poem. The flow worked really well and the rhyming was good too.
5/5

Good job, I HATE alcohol, because of what it does to people, and I have had bad experiences with people drinking. It's so sad to see what people can do while under the influence, which is why I will NEVER drink. Great job on this poem, I loved the emotion and every line was perfect.The only critism I can give if you might want to use punctuation.
--Steph

One of your better poems i think. it flowed well and was a joy to read. and it really had a msg to it. unfortunatly so true for some people , but hey thats life. no one ever said it would be perfect

Another great poems. you are quiet the poet. wish i can be that good. cant really get past....mediocre. but you surpass that. great job thought!