Thats so bittersweet hun =(
You did an excellent job on the emotive side of this all the way through, you really involved the reader in your words...
Well done.
5/5
*Gem*

Thanks! It came from the heart.

I can deffinatly relate to that poem, I hope you feel better 5/5

As Gem said, bittersweet, but I loved it. Keep up the great work.

Awww..I thought that was real sad. I think we've all been there. Betrayed by a good friend, but it's just a matter of moving on. Anyway, I liked this poem! Keep it up!

Hey hon I've been reading your poems and I read your forum poast on the discussion board and I give you my deepest sympathy with the issue you're dealing with. Your poetry is beautiful and I hope things work out for you! 5/5

~jas~

Very nicely written peice of poetry. I liked it. The emotion within was good. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

You kept my intrest in this one to ... just when i thought it might get boring you caught my attetion once again nice work

Once again, well writen. You truly have a beautiful soul and its is expressed through you poetry. Love your way of writing, so innocent, truthful, simple ....and ..amazing. Been through one of these already also, worked out for the best tho, best friends again and still going strong. Hope this goes well for you, good things come to those who wait, ^_^ love muches cutie

Wow. Thats sad...:((