by aDORKable x3 Dec 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Verse 1: |
by Jenni Marie
This my dear...is BEAUTIFUL! |
by Mommy And Me
I don't usually read lyrics for i am not really into songs as you already know... but from what i read i think you should have verse 2 and three back to back and get rid of the course inbetween those two... i think it will pull the song together just a bit more. otherwise great work. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Mm beautiful. i like your work. *looks for an error to pick apart* |
by donna
Excellent poem/lyrics babes.. very well written as always 5/5 xx |
by Bryan
Whoever downvoted should be kicked off the site, it deserves a 5/5!!! great poem ciao, i need you to pick which poems you want done, congrats on winning the contest!!! |