Whoever downvoted should be kicked off the site, it deserves a 5/5!!! great poem ciao, i need you to pick which poems you want done, congrats on winning the contest!!!

Excellent poem/lyrics babes.. very well written as always 5/5 xx

Mm beautiful. i like your work. *looks for an error to pick apart*
nope, none.

I don't usually read lyrics for i am not really into songs as you already know... but from what i read i think you should have verse 2 and three back to back and get rid of the course inbetween those two... i think it will pull the song together just a bit more. otherwise great work.

-/2 Terra

This my dear...is BEAUTIFUL!
Ohh, I think I'm lost for words...
I really, really enjoyed this, the flow was flawless throughout, I found every verse to be filled with emotion and depth and I adore the chorus.
You did a beautiful job with this.