Torn photograph

by Miakoda   Dec 23, 2006


In her room upon the floor
Is a collection of photos
from the bed to the door

Pictures of friend
and picture of foe
But one photo lay torn
who it is I don\\\'t know

But she lay there in mourn
her face in her hand
Her pain was reborn

He had something different planned
And he cheated and he lied
Then left her where she stand

As much as she tried
He wouldn\\\'t look back
her love was denied
And it turned her heart black

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    Good poem. Short sweet and to the point. And also welcome to the club lol. Keep on writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar

    It's short it's great*5

  • 17 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    I love where you added "and it turned her heart black", it sounds so cold...
    --musiclives23

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I think this was a good poem...but it might be better if you add more to it.. but good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I liked this poem a lot- it was excellent. Just where you say
    He left her where she stand....
    (lol I think)
    But anyways stand should be stood!

    5

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