Wow your amazing i love this poem its just like amazing

I liked this poem a lot- it was excellent. Just where you say
He left her where she stand....
(lol I think)
But anyways stand should be stood!

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I think this was a good poem...but it might be better if you add more to it.. but good job!

I love where you added "and it turned her heart black", it sounds so cold...
--musiclives23

It's short it's great*5

Good poem. Short sweet and to the point. And also welcome to the club lol. Keep on writing.