"I love him so much
But he is not real
Too intoxicated
and too numb to feel"
^ I love that stanza, especiallyt he last too lines.

You did a great job with this poem. The ending confused me a bit, BUT only because I thought it would be about an ex or current boyfriend, eh.

You did a great job with this poem, as well.
Keep it up. <3 Teria.