I\'m Dieing

by GothicRockerGirl   Dec 24, 2006


Down in the dumps,
Just one of the chumps.
Chumps set up in their lives
No matter who cries.
I am done crying,
I am finally here dying.
On the chopping block,
Waiting for the clock.
I am here dying,
There is no more trying.
I can't take this anymore,
I bought the knife at the store.
It had a sharp blade,
And oh the cuts it made.
Here on my wrists,
The blade slits.
Crimson was the color of my blood,
I hit the floor with a big thud.
So here, I am now dieing.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tamara

    Sometimes you can over do it with the rhymes. try a different rhyme sceme like every second line rhyming or such for a better effect. But over all, its pretty good.