This is absolutely amazing!! You are so going in my faves, if you aren't already, I don't keep track of these things. You are an awesome writer. Keep it up. You keep writing, I keep reading, and I keep commenting. Great job. Most definately 5/5

Emily

I really loved this poem it was great thanx for writing it!!

Very good.
Quite long ;] Lol.

5.

N-G-C-S.

What was the gift? i wanna know