A great poem, with so much emotion in it, great write.
you are really talented, keep it up.
a 5/5 from me.

Wow, that was brilliant. The flow and rhythm was spot on, and the wording excellent. Brilliant job.

That was brill! Your very talented!! So much emotion! Fantastic! Keep writing!! oxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxo

Wow.
I loved it! So dark and emotion-filled and I can definately relate to this one. You had a great flow and wonderful vocabulary. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

I really liked this poem especially how you ended it, it was just such a good last line.

5/5

I can relate to this cuz at school i wear a mask as well but i dont cut myself thankfully
i luv this poem and i think it was really well worded and put together.

5/5

I love this one! It's very good; the rhyme's fit, it's emotional, and it portrays the message very clearly. 5/5 <3

Wow, this poem almost made me cry, my best friend cuts, so it hit hard, I really liked how you put kind fury into the blade, kind of a hidden wall between the outside world and your own world whe you're alone. 100/100