I'm sorry, but i don't know what the f#ck people are thinking by rating this 1/5. that is b*ll$h*t. sorry, but i honestly think this is amazing work and it hurts me that someone would say it is bad. they obviously have different tate from me, and if they don't like dark poetry, then they shouldn't be reading it and DEFINETLY not voting on it. ok, so anyways, that's my opinoin. its great. the caps help, but i would use them only on certain lines that you REALLY want to get across, and if you feel that way about the whole poem, don't do the whole thing in caps, because it makes it seem obnoxious. (sp?) anyways, thats my advise.
love~Crissy