Hey hun lot of emoti0n coming through in this poem. very touching piece. xx

"Torn between two people
No idea of how to choose
Cos no matter what the outcome
In a way I'm going to lose"

This is a great stanza! I can obviously see who you chose! I loved it!
xoxo

You've made the right choice :))
Im very happy for you the poem is yet another treause to add to your colection of priceless thoughts forever i shall me a devoted fan :))

Good job! Very sweet yet very sad. I hate tough situations like this...ones where you feel you lose and win all at the same time, because the losing is easier, but the winning still sucks! lol Does this make sense!???!
Charisma*

HEY GOOD JOB.. i REALLY LIKED IT, it really does relate to real life especially between teenagers too... it also had a lot of emotion.. I really liked it .. again lol

*victoria*

Wow..this was a really good poem. it's great you found someone who loves you so much:) anyway, the poem was flawless. 5/5.

When choosing your future, look within your heart and the answer will come. I know for you it did. Although, our lives may be riddled with difficult decisions, always look to your heart and soul for the answers, because they will lead you on the right path, dear friend.

Jeannie

WOW, this is a really emotional poem, i really like it cuz it really gets to me.. i know what u mean, not exactly the same situation ,but i know where ur comming from and i dont think i could of ever written about it the way u did =] keep it up!