by Mezmeryz
Hey this poem is awesome.. i simply loved the way it rhymed so perfectlyyyy....i haven't read the story but this poem tells it perfectly and fluently.. |
by Cindy
This was a very sad yet wonderful writing. The love of two sisters comes through in this very strongly! Ecellent! |
by Bryan Raff
Usually, I don't enjoy reading sad poems, but this one had a very nice and inspirational ending, good job. |
by Michelle18
This is so sad! its a great poem.. your a good writer. |
by bon
Your writing was good, i liked the flow of the poem and well now it makes me want to read this book i rated 5/5 |
Wow. That actually made me want to read the book. I will go to the library tomorrow. Great work with this one, so much emotion and depth. |
by ASPHYXIATED
I loved that book. |
by Mousie
Wow, yet another amazing poem from an amazing writer! beautiful flow, i've never read the book but it still touches me, great flow and great wording, an excellent piece. 5/5 |
by Mommy And Me
Well done. This was a deep and meaningful poem. I’m actually sorta at a loss for words. There is nothing to improve. And nothing needing change. |
by Rachel RTVW
I never read the book but the poem is well done. Sad that someone who gave their all had their own life end so suddenly. |
Oh wow, that was intense. I am glad I came across your post asking for people to read this, because had i not, I would not have been affected, as I have been by this poem. this was utterly amazing, so well written and the words were beautiful. The emotions in this poem actually brought tears to my eyes, great work. |
by Rona
I must say, this is truly touching. I loved the way this poem was written! It had a smooth flow and the rhyming scheme was great! I think I want to read that novel now. Haha! Great job! |
Oh my goodnes.. i love this poem.. its soo amazing.. written beautifully.. and its soo sad i hope its not true.. is so im soo sorry |
Oh wow lol jk.. its not true i didnt read the little notice you put at the top of the poem till just now.. haha lol.. still GREAT POEM!! lol |
by raya
Reading that gave me butterflies, and i haven't even read the book. I must find it now and read it. |
I love this poem, and this book is excellent!! Im sure Jodi Picoult would love it too. Lol. This poem was great, it had good ryming, good flow. Its really sad, and the books ending was quite shocking, thought all the people that havent read this book, the supridse got spoilt! Read the book first! Lol. Excellent work, keep it up! xx |
Wow this poem is so touching, it's amazing how things in life can just happen like that. i know the story probably isn't true but still, these things happen. Theres nothing better then the gift of life and we should make the most of it. Great job 5/5 keep up the excellent work |
Wow that was really emotional. I've never read the book, but your poem was amazing. I almost started crying at the end of the poem, because the sister died. It was so sweet and sad at the same time. You did an excellent job writing this. |
by Jenni
That was so sad! I want to cry! |
by amoxi
This was amazing, i actually just finished reading this book about a month ago and i thought it was a great read but it have a very suprizing ending, you captured the book and its feelings so well, it was wonderfully written great job 5/5 |