I think that the whole nature theme is really cool. Well written and the rhyming flows with the poem nice. I'm just starting poetry so this is not a professional opinion.
~Lindsay

Not necessarily my type of poem, but very well written. Good word use and use of meter.
5/5
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~Stephen White

Wow very unique love the approach and your words are so fresh this was an excellent read and write..great jobb.

lissa

Great poem. i really liked it. keep up the good work. ^_^