Good poem, its awesome when poems actually have a meaning to someone but noone else knows what its for.

Love the poem, fav line was ''You may feel broken, but you're blessed
I see that you're in trouble, I feel your pain
But I hover up here watch you pass your test
Though I watch you suffer, I see you strain'' well done oxoxoxoxo

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Oh wow... that was beautiful..
I am actually at a loss for words..

"You peer into your mirror and gaze into your face
Into eternity, comparing with his girl
Tears staining the cheeks and leaving a lace
I say you are as beautiful as a pearl"

That stanza is something i was stupid enough to do so many times in the past.. it;s just not worth it..
Amazing piece. Amazing
5/5
*Gem*

This is so sweet and reminded me f my boy lovd it a lot you expressed this fantastically

Wonderful Poem Very nicely writen...I would love to see more poems from you..

Wow that was amazing!... i loved it...it was so sweet, and i loved the way you wrote it... i also like the stanza *Gem* liked! ... 5/5 from me, and thanks a lot for the comment.

That was brilliant, such a true message displayed in this poem, if only we all had a dedicated friend like you...well done

Your use of words was lovely! I really really enjoyed reading your work