No,most of the time,I just have emotions that are bottled inside me,that like to come out in poetry. Do you think it's bad?

Wow. Very nice poem. Your bottled up emotions, you surely express them well. Great work. Keep it up.

Kristina

xoxo

Well,thanks. Most of my poems, I think are sucky,but people are like "Wow,there really good!!" So I try to tell myself there good and just get over it lol.

I think that was really great. If you keep putting your feelings down on paper, you don't have to worry about them bottling up inside. That's why I write poems. Poems aren't meant to be good, poems are for the human soul, to release things that you don't want always there.

Most of my poems,are sad and thats beause I have had expiriance with things like cutting and suicide,and death. I write poetry to express who I am, and have atleast one thing to make me happy. :)

that was friggin awsome well..................... u know wut i mean

wow this poem is awsome u have skills girl....im sry if this happened to anyone u know or something

And feary i have experienced things like suicide too!!me and my friends have but u wioo get through it just dont give up on it and u will be fine

Most of my poems are sad,they're the things that can expres the real me that people don't know.

Lol,I wasn't mad. I have to be depressed to write a poem. So,i'm mostly depressed.

thats a great poem and teaches lesson u exspressed urself very well and it seems like u went trought it! keep up the awesome work

Thanks, and to Brittany, I know it's sad. If you flip through most of my poetry you see most of them are all sad but maybe one. There about Suicide, and parents leaving and most of it's real as in people can realate to it. Have you ever felt good when you weren't alone in feeling the way you do? When theres a poem someone wrote that expresses the same thing you feel, wether it be depressed or happy? I do, and that's why I write what I do.

i really like ur poem it is really nice i was hoping u could give me some advice on my poetry please i mean i have lots of thoughts i just dont know how to express them my email adress is babygirl69@rcn.com

Thanks. People are surprised, because I'm only 13 and everything.

omg the poem made me cry look what you did know im cry that is the sadest poem iv ever read wait never mind it wa just so fu**'n sad

Heh, thanks.

wow, great poem, loved it, keep it up gurl, much love RoBiN

I understand that even tho it didnt happen to you, you would like to express your feelings and you did so very well in this poem its just that i wonder did the drug problem with your mom ever exist?

Thats truely amazing. very brilliant. good job to you.

Damn girl! Hope it wasn't true! This poem was sad; it had so much emotions! I really like It!!!!!!
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