Awwwwwwww..i think this one is great.. its one of the best i've read.

This is a sweet dedication to your mother. Nice job!

I thought this was really sweet.
I bet this means a lot to your mother.
I liked the imagery you used.

Nice poem

The flow is a little broken but a really sweet poem. i hope you shared this with your mum.

much love and many kisses,
bex

This was so sweet. I loved it.
So straight out and just beautiful.
Take care.
-Alaskan Nugget...A.K.A Pingu.