Kinda a twisted poem.. but a good one. 4/5

I love this stanza:

Butterfly kisses and bearhugs are gone,
We're only left to dance our last song.
I would never put a gun to my lover's head,
But you did that deed instead.

The rhythm and rhyme were beautiful...and so was the meaning you wove into the poem. As usual you had a great ending as well...keep it up Ray ;)

I love the scheme and detail. it was really good ray. one of ur best. ur getting better than me....
much love

~SORE