Wow! Great poem!!
"to the next un-polluted life
when we meet someday again
and it will all be alright"
I love that part cause it is so true. Nice poems!! 5/5

~Shae

This piece is excellent, that may not be constructive critique or anything, but I can't fight much flaw with this poem. The only thing I'd have to say is that using the word "thee" to rhyme is not the best, in my opinion, because it doesn't match the language of the piece. Still, 5/5

~jas~