by Tim Dec 24, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Here are two poems that I've written for a certain someone... One I wrote a couple of months ago, and the other I've just finished. Tell me what you think. |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
They are both super cute. I think the second poem flows better then the first one though. The first poem has a question we all want to ask the ones we love. Are we meant to be?. I loved that line because its a very real question. I love your endings as well because it makes the reader think again.. as in will the writer get together with their love. :) excellent first poem. |
by Dreamofolwin
A most heartfelt poem...... expressing a lot of feelings that you have very well expressed... Well Done! :) |
by Ale
These are very nice poems. I like how the words flow, unlike mine. I hope you write something new soon. |
by Jenna
I really like these...you have a very wonderful talent!!! keep it up hun! |
by Tenisha
I loved it it was kind of like u thought about it and it showed like this cute before and after plot like scheme i just loved it u're really talented don't quite i love it |