Haha, made me chuckle :)

Haha that made me giggle haha i liked it
~*~Jen~*~

Hahaha, I loved this. It was very hard to read lol, i kept going back and reading the same line over about three times, which is good for a tongue twister, great job!:)

--steph

Good stuff good stuff

Good job its was pretty close to 1 ive heard before called "Betty boughter" But once i read it i could tell it was original good work nice ending.