Who doesent luv the oldies :P I thought that my soul
Was much stronger that this then?

a fool in luv is someone that doesent lissen 2 themselves... n only acts on feelings

Peace
Anthony

"The effect you had on me
Was too much to bare
My mind saw this coming
My heart didn't care"

This is great! The poem was fantastic! Nice wording!
xoxo

What a excellent poem. you have a real talent for writing about so many diffrent things. Great job!

This fits exactly with how i feel, you've done a tremendous job with this poem, its an old one of yours but came just at the right time for me, thank you :)

Oldies but goodies:)

Nice job! All your stuff, old or new, seems to be so good. Sorry the comments are so short, but you had like 10 to 15 new ones! Just trying to read them all!
Good job!
Charisma*

Well, you have such a gift. i loved the detailing yet again, it really painted a picture. the flow was great too. 5/5

This was very good!

I believe that in the lines:

"I thought that my soul
Was much stronger that this"

should be:

"I thought that my soul
Was much stronger than this"

Otherwise a good read. The flow was flawless and the content and message well done.

Jeannie

I love this because it relates so much to the human heart

Thats really great i really like it