Yea marcus iz very luckey, but im sure he knows that aswell.... i love u iz never over used only abused. nice oldie poem 5/5
Peace
Anthony

Hey that was really good beautifully written. great job xx

Very cute!

Soo cute! I loved it! As you already know I can relate! I loved it and you seem soo happy! Great job!
xoxo

Your love for your man shines through in this poem. Merry Christmas! Great job!

"I think i've overused those three words since then" The poem didint make me smile as much as this lol i was like good girl show him you care :)) the poem was fantasic as always you never seem to disapoint :))

How sweet to be young and in love.....

This is lovely............
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For your consideration:

A comment on Stanza 3:......
You write:..."Please don't ever doubt
That my feelings aren't real".........

Essentially you are saying:...Please do not ever doubt that my feelings are not real.........I'm thinking you meant:....Please don't ever doubt
That my feelings ARE real...
Peace,
GrammaEditorWhoAnnoysALittle........;-)

There's no point denying
That you make my world move

Glad you've overused the words....good poem!
Btw, those top lines were my fav...loved the imagery!
Charisma*

You already know what i think Gem.. Amazing :) i havent read one poem that hasnt been amazing of urs. Just exceptional, wonderful write, keep it up! 100/5 :P

~[AnotherDream]~

Aw how cute! i loved the detailing, again. it was really just wow. lol i cant describe. haha 5/5

Three simple words, yet they mean the world, don't they. To say them... hear them... feel them. Isn't that what makes living worth living.

A great tribute to a feeling not spoken of enough.

Jeannie