This poem is really long but i enjoyed it very much, the meaning is excellent and the flow is great also, nice work 5/5

Um. Yeah. I'm completely blown away by this. This is the type of poem that really leaves me with nothing to say. I loved this. But I just wanted to read more. I loved how it started and went on to tell a story. This was just great. Amazing write! Idk what else to say...5/5

-` Liz

I agree. Im speachless. I loved it though. I could read it all day.I was hopeing for a little more length cause i was so interested. It made sense.

I like the topic and imagery of the piece but it needs to be organized a little better and some of the rhyming at the beginning just seemed thrown in. I do however love these lines:

"Her tongue was cut, her back was bled, her mind awake, her body dead."

The flow was flawless here, the image great. All in all thought it was a good piece, just a little rough in spots, good job.